Tell me the secret of what makes you special. Don’t tell me the obvious. I want to know the small things. You don’t know yourself, do you? Let me help.
I watch you. I love the way you smile with your eyes. The way you make a small gesture with your hand when you are making a point. I love the way you stuff your hands into your pockets when we talk facing each other. Are you restraining yourself? Don’t.
When you stare briefly at me, it makes me wonder what you are thinking. When you can tell I’ve noticed, you can’t hold back your naughty grin. You never can. The energy between us thickens. It would be hard not to notice. And I know you do.
Your clear eyes sparkle with hints of knowledge. I am curious about you. You compel me, but I can’t let on. I know something special about you.
You are warmth without touching.
god, what a great ending. great piece, awesome close out.
ReplyDeleteEd, Thank you so much! That means alot to me coming from you, "the closer." :)
ReplyDeleteYou want to know something special? I LOVE your writing and the building of your story. This post give you a hug and makes you feel good. :) Thanks for writing.
ReplyDeleteFabbi, Thank you so much! You are so kind! I'm really glad you like it. :) It's comments like this that keep me writing.
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